Pelgris

This concludes this installment of Ballroom.  I suppose I should name these characters.  If you felt I gave short shrift to the whipping scene, then I can only offer this,  you are right.  I have never found whipping someone to be compelling. Being whipped on the other hand has some appeal.  But for my extreme edge play, I prefer flechettes.  Something about the blade parting skin is very compelling.  I plotted out the scenes and knew it would culminate in the whipping but by the end I now longer desired to portray it.  So instead we see safety and domesticity brought to the forefront.  I think adequately showing that play is only a facet of these characters relationship.  As well as how much the top truly cares for his sub.  Comments welcome.